Friday 29 August 2014

A descriptive essay (people)

Write about a person who worked very hard to succeed in his life. Write a composition of about 350 words.


          I do not have to search for the most hardworking person that I know. The person is right here in my home itself. The person I am mentioning is my father, Encik Abdul Rahim bin Kassim. My father has been the most hardworking person that I have come across in my life. I can just describe him as a 'workaholic'. He holds to his principle which is "Work is Worship".


          My father is a lawyer by profession. He is a successful lawyer. His success did not come in an easy way. It came through his hard work. He struggled when he was young. He lost his father and became the breadwinner of the family. Whatever he earned in those days by doing odd jobs is used for the daily needs of his family which consisted of his mother and his younger sister.


          My father had the motivation to succeed in life and was good at his studies. He planned his time well and able to attend school even when he was working. My father then won a scholarship to further his studies in a college after doing well in his school's exam. Later, he completed his studies in law with his second scholarship. Today, he is a leading lawyer in our city. This comes after his hard work in building his career. 


          My father is regular and systematic at work. At least one of his assistants will be in the office working with my father when he is ready to begin the work for the day. Together with his assistant, he goes through the cases posted for the day and prepares himself for the court. Once done, he leaves for the court. Sometimes his trainee lawyer also follows him for the hearings.


            In the court too, my father will always be on his leg. Either presenting a case or pleading for his client with the presiding officer or consulting his notes for the case to be heard next. As a lawyer, my father spends some time discussing with other lawyers about major cases.


          After the work in the court is over, my father will straight away walk into the office. He will prepare himself for the coming cases. Sometimes he also goes out to get more information about his case. If my father is just in the office, he will spend his time by reading law journals and books to keep him updated. Often his reading goes till late in the night.


          My father has an inexhaustible energy in him. Such energy comes from his devotion and dedication to his work. His clients like him very much. He also has other qualities that endear him to his friends, relatives and friends. Now that he has achieved the height of his career, he is aiming to become a judge. I am sure he will achieved that soon.          


(Source: SPM Composition, Learning Through Diagrams, 2011)





A descriptive paragraph (people)

When you describe someone, you give a picture in words to your readers. To make the word picture as vivid and as real as possible, you must write specific details that appeal to your readers' senses (sight, hearing, taste, smell and touch). A descriptive paragraph needs sharp and colourful details.


Example
Here is a paragraph written by a student describing her mother.


The young woman in the picture has a face that resembles my own in many ways. Her face is a bit  more oval  than mine but the softly waving brown hair around it is identical. The small straight nose is the same model I was born with. My mother's mouth is closed, yet there is just the slightest hint of a smile on her full lips. I know that if she had smiled, she would have shown the same wide grin and down curving "small lines" that appear in my own snapshots. The most haunting features in the photo, however, are my mother's eyes. They are exact duplicates of my own large, dark brown ones. Her brows are plucked into thin lines which are like two pencil strokes added to highlight those fine, luminous eyes.



(Extracted from http://www.sabri.org)

Describing a person's facial hair


Adjectives:  bearded, unshaven, clean-shaven, trimmed, neatly trimmed


Describing a person's hair

Hair
Texture/ Appearance
- wavy, curly, straight, spiky, stiff, buzzed, shaved, parted, neatly combed, tamed, long, short, cropped


Hair styles
- braids, ponytail, pig tails, bun, twist, bob, ringlets, flips, bangs, buzz layered, feathered, chopped, gelled, spiked, slicked down


Lots of hair
- thick, full, lustrous, bushy, coarse, wiry (stiff)


Little hair
- thin, scraggly, fine, baby-fine, wispy, limp, flat, balding, bald, bald spot, receding hairline (gradual loss of hair at the front of the head)


Treated hair
- permed, dyed, bleached, highlighted, weaved


Hair colours
- black, brunette, brown, chestnut-brown, honey-blond,blond, golden-blond, ash-blond, auburn, red, strawberry-blond, gray, silver, white, salt-and-pepper


Describing a person's mouth/ lips

Shapes of lips
 


Laughing



Smiling



Grinning

Describing a person's eyes

Eye shape and size


 Eyebrow shape



Eye expressions:
piercing eyes
mesmerizing eyes
sad eyes
sorrowful eyes
tear-filled eyes
gentle eyes
sympathetic eyes
warm eyes
compassionate eyes
expressive eyes
twinkling eyes
lively eyes
dancing eyes
laughing eyes



Describing a person's face

Face Shape
-   square, oval, round, triangular, heart-shaped




Skin/ Face/ Complexion
Complexion is the natural appearance and colour of the skin, especially of the face.
For example, Mary has a creamy, soft complexion.


Freckled:  sprinkled or covered with light brown spots
 


Rosy:  pink-cheeked; fair complexion that glows with a hink of pink
 

Ruddy:  skin that has a healthy reddish tint; may have the appearance of sunburn

Tanned:  skin with a healthy golden-brown tint

Wrinkled:  full of or covered with lines or loose folds of skin; often associated with age


Other skin related adjectives:   pale, spotless, silky, smooth, creamy, baby-soft, glowing, paper-thin or translucent (as with a very old person), rough, callused, dry



Thursday 28 August 2014

Welcome, 4AK2 students!

Dear students,

This is your English class blog. I will post announcements on what we are supposed to do throughout these few weeks and notes that are related to descriptive writing in this blog. Feel free to explore some of the links that I have attached here. Hopefully, you will be able to improve your English a bit with the help of this blog. May Allah SWT make it easy for you...